Take a ghost walk with me...
This has become a ghost blog of late...good news, I'm including an excerpt to make amends...so keep reading ;o)
Anyone out there wanna guess where we're going?
"Lilly, the chicken's bottoms aren't fat enough. Do you have any more stuffing?"
"If I had a dollar for every time someone's asked me that..." Lilly Brooks looked up from her portable sewing machine and handed over a bag of cotton batting. "And for the last time, Amanda. They're hens. Happy mothers, all."
The stars of her Mother's Day booth for Silent Springs Elementary's upcoming Spring Fling.
"Okay, then." Amanda Lawson crammed a brown, corduroy bottom with more fuzzy, white filling. "I don't think top-heavy hen's toppling over and smothering live chicks is what Ms. Emory had in mind when you volunteered to do something special for the K-3rd grade moms."
"Good point." Lilly grabbed a handful of cotton, plumped the nearest chicken's tush to find the hidden Velcro seam and pried it open. "I'm going for memories the families can look back on and cherish. Not scarring children for life."
She'd pitched the assistant principal an exhibit where carnival attendees could stop and play with baby chicks, then smile for a commemorative Polaroid that the kids would decorate for a Mother's Day present. Another fabulous idea, Annette Emory had cooed. I'm sure you'll pull it
Lilly stuffed and sighed.
So far she'd lined up a local farmer to provide the chicks, arranged to rent a tent from the same company providing the dunking booth, and she and her best friend Amanda would be spending their lunch hours for the next two weeks effortlessly sewing and painting a picturesque barnyard motif for other women to enjoy with their kids.
Only fitting, in light of my eerie absence, that we talk of things ghostly and ethereal. Come take a ghost walk with me this weekend... I'm signing in my home town on the 23rd and taking a short weekend getaway with my family to catch up with ghosts of long before and savor as much salt air as I can get down...
Anyone out there wanna guess where we're going?
Savannah, my friends, that lovely grand dame of the deep south exceded in beauty only by Charleston, the place of my birth. Those of you in the lowcountry who have nothing at all to do on the 23rd but wander a bit, come see me and two of my Georgia Romance Writer friends at the Barnes and Nobel ant Oglethorpe Mall (off Abercorn) from 2:00 to 4:00. (Hey Missy/Melissa S.! Looking forward to seeing you there, and at UGA in July ;o)
If you miss out, catch me at one of the local cemetaries later in the day, where I L-O-V-E to write (I head down at least once a year on my own to those lovely, quiet places where the world holds its breath and the breeze speaks to us about years gone by and lives lived either to their fullest or in vain). Here's a look at the civil war cemetary where I sat on a bench and wrote one fine day last December... When the moss sways in the breeze, it's almost like the oak trees themselves are breathing... I was working on finishing up Because of a Boy then...was that really just six months ago!
Of course, it's just as likely I'll be near the water (the river, the ocean or the inter-costal). I grew up surrounded by all three, and sometimes I think it's the humidity that fed my creativity as the child. When the air around you takes on a life of its own, haunting your breath, cloaking you in heat, its nurturing embrace feeding you the same as it does the year-around vegitation that thrives down there, how can you not grow up to write about secret matters of the heart and enchanting worlds that aren't quite real?
Okay, we need a spooky headstone or two to seal the deal. Come to Savannah and enjoy yourselves sometime soon. Come to the signing if you can. But if not, don't miss out on a taste of something truely unique and unbelievably real--a glimpse of the life many of you likely fell in love with in The Prince of Tides (which was set around Charleston, I know, and shot mostly in New York, but when I watch that movie I go back home to where the tides dictate everyone's moods and the sea gulls tell you whether it's time to head out on the water or not).
Now, about that excerpt. I've just finished the rough draft of my '08 Mother's Day novella...tentatively titled, Baby Steps. I'll tell you more what the story's about in the next blog post. For now, enjoy the first scene (can't share too many, since there's only a 100 pages to it to begin with).
A little hint, I'm playing off a theme from a familiar Disney fairytale. The blog faithful might remember which one. I chatted about it earlier this year. Anyone wanna take a guess??? I'm betting there's a prize in it for someone...
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"Lilly, the chicken's bottoms aren't fat enough. Do you have any more stuffing?"
"If I had a dollar for every time someone's asked me that..." Lilly Brooks looked up from her portable sewing machine and handed over a bag of cotton batting. "And for the last time, Amanda. They're hens. Happy mothers, all."
The stars of her Mother's Day booth for Silent Springs Elementary's upcoming Spring Fling.
"Okay, then." Amanda Lawson crammed a brown, corduroy bottom with more fuzzy, white filling. "I don't think top-heavy hen's toppling over and smothering live chicks is what Ms. Emory had in mind when you volunteered to do something special for the K-3rd grade moms."
"Good point." Lilly grabbed a handful of cotton, plumped the nearest chicken's tush to find the hidden Velcro seam and pried it open. "I'm going for memories the families can look back on and cherish. Not scarring children for life."
She'd pitched the assistant principal an exhibit where carnival attendees could stop and play with baby chicks, then smile for a commemorative Polaroid that the kids would decorate for a Mother's Day present. Another fabulous idea, Annette Emory had cooed. I'm sure you'll pull it
off as effortlessly and successfully as you do everything else.
Lilly stuffed and sighed.
So far she'd lined up a local farmer to provide the chicks, arranged to rent a tent from the same company providing the dunking booth, and she and her best friend Amanda would be spending their lunch hours for the next two weeks effortlessly sewing and painting a picturesque barnyard motif for other women to enjoy with their kids.
A perfect Mother's Day surprise that would take a month to make a success.
She glanced around the cluttered, colorful art room. Amanda put her energy into exploring and enjoying the school day with her students. Getting the most out of each moment. Not so much with the planning and worrying that everything be perfect. Lilly had the corner on that.
She tossed a chicken at her carefree friend.
Amanda giggled and lobbed the lovingly-stuffed bundle onto its growing pile of peers. "So, what's next?"
"Mr. Klein offered to bring enough animals for a petting zoo, if we had a large enough space." Lilly had been his granddaughter's third grade teacher last year, and she'd encouraged little Molly's parents to test her for Dyslexia. Since starting treatment, the formally shy, withdrawn child had blossomed, and the Klein family was convinced Lilly was their angel's fairy godmother. "But I'm not sure—"
"Do it!" Amanda ran her hands over at the bolts of bargain-bin fabric Lilly was morphing into easily controlled replicas of living, breathing, pooping stable inhabitants. "Sewing everything would be a safer solution, especially now that the chickens—hens—are looking less like the bad end of a funhouse mirror. But a little chaos is a good trade-off. Things might get crazy, mixing things up with the kids and real animals, but they'll love it!"
Crazy...mixing things up...
Panic bloomed at the mere suggestion. Lilly was starting to hate that about herself.
"Maybe... Maybe it wouldn't be so out of control," she heard herself agreeing, when she'd promised their very conservative AP a calm, picture-perfect photo op. "As long as we're careful about which animals Mr. Klein brings..."
"Dakota, stop running in the hallway!" a familiar voice boomed, a split second before a whirlwind dressed in jeans, tee-shirt and ball cap blurred through the doorway and ran smack into Lilly and Amanda's poultry assembly line.
"Look out!" Amanda dove left.
Lilly ducked right. "Ah!"
The boy hit his knees and slid beneath the table, catching a table leg with his sneaker. Corduroy and butt stuffing flew into the air. The table clattered to on its side. Their hen-assailant kept on sliding, until he'd crashed into the easel Amanda had set up to teach the second graders coming in after lunch.
"Ow!" he yelped.
The wooden frame collapsed on top of him.
"Are you ladies okay?" His pursuer's emerald gaze connected with Lilly's. Tyler knelt on one knee and helped her to her feet.
His frown warmed to a heart-tugging smile in response to her nod that she was fine. When his touch slid slowly away and he turned toward Amanda, Lilly forced herself to let go and head for the struggling heap of little boy and art supplies in the corner.
"Nice slide into home-plate slide, kiddo." She extricated the easel, then the blank canvas that had been propped on top of it. The kid's shaggy, dark hair partially obscured the dark eyes glowering up at her. "I bet you're a champ on the ball field."
"Baseball's for sissies, stupid!" His insult missed it's mark. His scowl was simply too adorable to pull it off.
"Dakota, you know better than that!" Silent Springs' impossibly tall, impossibly handsome PE teacher corrected. He stepped to her side. "Apologize to Mrs. Brooks for your bad manners."
The child struggled to feet that were covered in unlaced, hole-riddled sneakers that were as black as everything else he wore--except his Atlanta Braves ballcap. Lilly thought she caught a hint of embarrassment, maybe even regret, touch his hostile expression. Then he wiped his hair from his eyes, and everything but anger disappeared.
"Why do you care how I treat to your wife," Dakota demanded. "Everyone in school knows you two aren't even living together anymore?"
Labels: Anna's World, Events, Excerpts from Anna's Novels, Giveaways
17 Comments:
At 7:57 PM, robynl said…
Snow White and The Seven Dwarfs
At 8:02 PM, Anna Destefano said…
Okay, Robyn...now were there any clues for you in the excerpt??? Because I know you're one of the faithful. Tell me what you see when you look deeply into the fluff that is my first scene...
And it's not the seven dwarfs--just one very special one ;o)
At 9:48 PM, Cheryl said…
Good job, Robyn! And the one dwarf is . . . Grumpy. Loved this post, Anna. Great excerpt, can't wait to read the whole story.
Cheryl
At 9:26 AM, CrystalGB said…
Great excerpt Anna. Have fun on your getaway. I am envious. Savannah sounds beautiful.
At 12:08 PM, Cherie J said…
Great excerpt! Enjoy your trip!
At 1:04 PM, robynl said…
Yes, Grumpy was the one as Cheryl said.
Dakota seems to be a neglected boy(clothes needing washed and repaired) and one who is angry(as was witnessed by the teachers) and he is a smart alleck("Baseball's for sissies, stupid!"). When I read that Snow White knew Grumpy was more than just the exterior of himself I thought this true of Dakota- he needed someone to take an interest in him; show him care, concern and love instead of neglect.
At 4:14 PM, Anonymous said…
Great excerpt. Have fun on your trip.
Stacy S
At 8:03 PM, catslady said…
Great excerpt and lol about Grumpy. Love the pics and the history behind them.
At 9:47 AM, ThatBrunette said…
I haven't been to GA in years! Loved it when I was there. Enjoy your trip and report back, soon!
At 10:55 AM, Anonymous said…
Anna,
Loved your post about Savannah. We're heading down in two weeks. I would have loved to come to your signing. I love Savannah. We usually stay at the Marriott on the River and eat at an English pub ( I think it's called Winston Churchills). Last time I had my tarot cards read and she was pretty accurate. It's a great city with a great atmosphere!
Sandra M
At 5:21 PM, Carol M said…
Yep, it's Grumpy! lol
I enjoyed the excerpt and the pictures! Enjoy your trip!
At 4:56 AM, Sue A. said…
I enjoyed the excerpt. I'm happy that we'll get to hear more about the story when you get back.
At 2:04 AM, Anonymous said…
loved the excerpt!!!
At 11:06 AM, Anonymous said…
Grumpy for sure! I am sooooo glad to have the time to visit again! Our vacation, birthday party, and garage sale have tied me completely up! I did finger food pool party for Joarji and 42 of her friends and our family and ended up making around 964 different sweet and savory pieces!! Kicked my booty!! LOL!! I'll try to get back again soon,but I'm still trying to get my house back in order if thats possible. LOL!! Linda G
At 10:23 PM, sandyy456 said…
I love the pictures! I gotta admit..I love visiting cemetaries in different cities while on vacation. Some of my best pictures were taken in cemetaries.
At 12:35 PM, Anonymous said…
Anna -
I attended the final seminar of yours at RWA. You did a fantastic job and I'm ready to write your way.
BTW, didn't know you are a Charleston girl, I grew up in Pinopolis and lived in Charleston for twelve years after graduating from USC.
My goal is to make enough money from writing to move back home - I'm near Memphis, Tenn. now. My husband says we can move home in 2013!
And I've seen many ghosts, even changed a fellow writer's mind about them in the line for free books at the conference. Now she's a believer too.
Robin Hillyer Miles
7092 Alder Wood Drive
Millington, TN 38053-3999
rhmiles@aol.com
At 10:39 AM, Anonymous said…
I lived in the Carolinas many years ~ and I love, love, LOVE Charleston :)
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